It's Not Your Fault

by Sandra D   Nov 12, 2006


You didn't do anything wrong, it's all me this time.
I don't really know what's wrong.
Maybe it's the fact I just saw my life flash before my eyes.
But it's not your fault.
You didn't know this would happen.
You didn't do this to me, I did.
I ruined myself, and now I'm hurt, permanently.
But you couldn't have done anything anyway.
It wouldn't have changed anything.
But don't blame yourself, just because...
I killed myself.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I love this poem. Its not your fault... such a great concept that everyone can relate to! The way it was written was very effective. But at the same time... it almost made me feel like I wanted to save you. Being able to fill a reader with emotions like this, ... I'm speechless. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Your poems are so sad some of mine are like that. i write down what i want to feel and all the horrid things that are in my mind this makes me fell better because if i want to have a good day i write and upsetting poem that would get rid of all my worry, anger, greif, anyway this poems remined me of some of mine:~)Sam

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow...the ending was sure twist..atleast i did'nt expect it to end tht way.....it was beautiful....filled with emotions sad n emotional...n penned properly.
    but i do think it'd hv been better expressed wth the usage of third person..kp writing!
    it has it's own beauty!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Marcus

    I like it
    but it feels like you should write it in 3rd person to make it more realistic
    like your tellin a story

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    Great job on this. The emotion was great and your poem ended very good... not that killing yourself is something good but the way u ended it. In my opinion its great. 5/5 keep up the good work

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