Deaths coming

by AshleexAstonished   Nov 12, 2006


Blood trickles
i get a rush
Soon stops
it's not enough
Another slice
just isn't working
Another slice
I'm still hurting
Going crazy
SLICE SLICE SLICE
Losing sanity
SLICE SLICE SLICE
.................................
Blood gushes
i'm ultimately high
Huge puddle
where i lie
Mentally ill
Rumor has it
Tears drop
As you close my casket.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    -mouth drops-...that ...was....AWESOME...omgoodness...i know exactly how you feel and you put it into words perfectly

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    Oh my god that sent shivers down my spine... A very powerful poem, it's short but every word was effective. Take care, 5/5
    - Polly x

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