by Zach Buenger Nov 12, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Why is it that the thing I want most is just beyond my finger tips |
This is indeed a very nicely written piece, u r a talented poet...keep writing |
by Cindy
This was just so heart warming. The love you have shown in this poem is beautiful. Very good job! |
by LucyPearl
A very very beatiful and meaningful poem. Truly loved it. Especially loved the way that the beginning and the ending of the poem fit so well together. the ending . - Beautiful . Keep it up! You have great talent and wisdom .. |
Its so true that love can never be understood theres no describing how u feel and if u can well then ur not in love nice bro 5/5 |