Normally I really like your work, but this was not a favorite of mine. It seemed to lack flow and true emotion. I'm sorry...normally I rate your stuff really high, but I'm just not in love with this one...but I do look forward to reading more of your stuff!
Charisma*

Hey darl a very touching poem. always like reading ur work. very heartfelt piece. xx

Oh my hell.
This poems is amazing hun.
You did a most wonderful job on it.
Great work. : )

>5<

-Heather-

Out of the complete remarkable work....this stanza just left me breathless

I could go out and find myself a clone
Instead, I will live my life, totally alone
Never again to look into her eyes, at her face
The feelings I will not be able to replace

great write once again

all the best and take care

Excellent poem!
The flow was nice and easy to read, the emotion in that poem was heartfelt(which is good) so strong, almost as if feeling them myself!

-AnnMarie

This is an amazing poem. It really shows your passion you had for her.

Nice write this is. I've been gone for a while and now I am back. I was looking forward to reading your lastest write but I wasn't in love with this one. Normally I always fall in love with them. Still a wonderful piece though.

-Kimmaly

Awww. I wish someone would feel this way about me. This was soo sweet. and really heartfelt. I can tell you put all of your emotions in it. and that is what makes poetry great. the flow and rhythm was perfect! great job!

This was a very sweet poem. You really expressed your emotions well, and all the readers know exactly how you are feeling in this poem. Even if someone has fallen in love, you described it well enough for them to feel it. Although it does have a sad twist to it, there is still so much passion. Well done.

This was a reallly touching poem i loved keep up the great work

Reading this poem was like De Ja Vue. I have felt something so similar to what you have felt here. I am sorry that someone else had to go through the dreadful pain that I have been through, but as the wise one say; " what dosen't kill us makes us stronger". Great job hun! 5/5

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Letty

I have commented on two of your poems. I owe you two more. Could you please post them on the page that I asked you to read my poems on? Thank you sweetie!

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Letty

Aww.. this is such a sad poem. You did ana amazing job expressing your emotions in this and could make the reader feel your pain through your words. You had some amazing word choice in this and it really gave the poem its individuality. Great job on this! 5/5

:) it is true that its often next to ipossible to describe what we feel for another :) you did a fine job here brining the feeling across to the reader :)) loved the poem :))