A Further Oblivion Unknown

by Elizabeth Ann   Nov 12, 2006



Thrice caressed our boundless flames and reached her countless shadow. Still as the darkness festered we cast our presence brooding.

Our venture staved the covered hollows ‘til they bled, moving deeper within. There beyond such magnificence stood uncloaked our greater journey, amusing mystery’s much greater lenience.

Too many frenzied souls rose to worship this maiden curiosity, venting in mutual novelty at its lordly chaos. Many sought to lose themselves therein a better madness, excused from their familiars and a more difficult reason.

Deeper then we went, cast nobles broadened by common stupidity which we’d never bred though been exposed by mortal rebellion. Our leaders faltered in this tendon abyss, pleading with some further oblivion unknown.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Oooh. I thought it was really pretty.
    I think didn't understand it- so I wont rate. (I would want to ruin the rating if it was really good- or up the rating if it was stupid... No offence.)
    It kind of reminded me of edgar Allan Poe. Haha.

    Happry writin'
    Hannah-