by Bridgette
I really like this poem. I've always thought of roses as very beautiful flowers and the way that you described them as growing in a withered field was very well thought out. The flow and rhythm was very good and held up well. You did an amazing job on this! 5/5 |
by Anonymous
The imagery and the word choice are EXCELLENT! The flow was okay, and I don't think this poem was meant to have anything to do with rhyming, so I won't even comment on that. I really think this should go in poems about nature, unless you have some sort of hidden message that I haven't caught, or I have, but I'm afraid to say for it might be wrong. |