by dollwithafrown Nov 12, 2006
category :
Life, society /
patriotism
Yesterday (11 November) was Remembrance Day in the UK, Ireland, Australia and Canada. I did my part by writing a poem. :) I would love it if you commented. --- |
This peom was awesome, the flow was excellant, and i love how it was like a short story. It very true aswell! Great job, i really like this poem!! |
by Tiffany
Hello. your peom is wonderful. |
Excellent penmanship...sad,amazing write...very sad yet there were a few grammar erors though but the emotions portrayed were strong |
by Esther
I like, long but i iiked! it was good! lol |
by ForeverYoung
Wow, that is amazing! its so so sad! you almost made me cry! |