Curiosity

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Nov 12, 2006


Over by the rivulet,
Settled by the Sierra,
Lying near the Eastern Divide,
Cries a contemptuous courier.

He sings a story,
Of a little lad,
Whom he knows quite well:

The lad of eleven,
Skipped school,
Set to work by the age of two,
Learned to tough it,
Out where the savaged screeched.
Where the wilderness,
Became his humble home.

He was strong and swaggering,
Believing in his significant strength,
Until the day he came across
A field of several hundred squirrels,
Who chittered constantly.

The curious chap,
Wanting to learn the words,
Spoken with a slur,
By the squirrels ever so sly.
He tip-toed tenuously,
Around the area,
Of where the creatures confide,
Trying to listen in,
In eavesdrop ever so earnestly.

However,
Without much luck,
The fidgety fellow,
Stumbled into a shallow stream,
Kicking and screaming,
Unable to swim skillfully,
In a rivulet two feet deep.

The squirrels standing nearby,
Laughed loudly,
At the bet the bid,
About the boy in the water.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Quite confusing, lol.
    But it still made me giggle

    "A field of several hundred squirrels,
    Who chittered constantly."

    Especially that bit, i find squirrels so funny, lol
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Hehehe... love the imagination you put in your poems!!! hehe... you honestly got the talent... :D

  • 17 years ago

    by luna bella

    Love the imagery

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Hmm...I didn't know exactly what you were trying to make this poem about. I found it was about animals and people, and animals laughing, but I just didn't get it.

    But, I did give you votes for the set up of the poem. The flow was not really there. If you put in a few filler words in some places, it would work out better. The flow is just all over the place and it makes it difficult to understand.

    The comedy, I didn't really see in this. I mean, it could be there since I didn't quite understand the whole concept of it, but meh. Keep writing. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Clever.. great imagery and word choice..