That was a very unique poem. i really liked it though. u chose some really great words and described things really well. the story in the poem was very interesting. i liked it. great job! 5/5

Hmm.. maybe for you title you can put Curiousity. hehe.. This was pretty interesting. Different.. very different. I like this part the best:
He was strong and swaggering,
Believing in his significant strength,
Until the day he came across
A field of several hundred squirrels,
Who chittered constantly.
-Sevaral hundred squirrels. at first i thought.. He'z gonna be attacked.. but then a read on-

Very good,

5/5

Clever.. great imagery and word choice..

Hmm...I didn't know exactly what you were trying to make this poem about. I found it was about animals and people, and animals laughing, but I just didn't get it.

But, I did give you votes for the set up of the poem. The flow was not really there. If you put in a few filler words in some places, it would work out better. The flow is just all over the place and it makes it difficult to understand.

The comedy, I didn't really see in this. I mean, it could be there since I didn't quite understand the whole concept of it, but meh. Keep writing. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Love the imagery

Hehehe... love the imagination you put in your poems!!! hehe... you honestly got the talent... :D

Quite confusing, lol.
But it still made me giggle

"A field of several hundred squirrels,
Who chittered constantly."

Especially that bit, i find squirrels so funny, lol
*Gem*