by John (Mr. Whuppy) Nov 12, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
My house is big and spacious built upon my own land |
by Nobodys Hero
This was a very sad piece, however it was very well written so great job. |
by Edward D Zurovec
Great poem John,,all from the heart.Terrible the loss of your Dad. Iam truly sorry." Through life we write the heart with ink". |
by Letty
This is a very touching poem. It is good that you want to keep the memories, because some people wouldn't know how to deal with them. I know how you feel because right now my mother is fighting breast cancer. It's hard, but I deal with it. This poem of yours has actually made me think. At first I was focusing on the worst, but now I can just enjoy the time that we have now. You are magnificent as usual John, it's nice to see a new poem from you. 5/5 |