Naive

by A Christoffer   Nov 12, 2006


How long until You defend Your name and set the record right
And how far will You allow the human race to run and hide
And how much can You tolerate our weaknesses
Before You step into our sky blue and say
Thats quite enough
Am I naive to want a remedy for every bitter heart
Can I believe You hold an exclamation point for every question mark
And can I leave the timing of this universe in bigger hands
And may I be so bold to ask You to please hurry?
I hear that a God whos good would never let the evil run so long
But I say its because Youre good Youre giving us more time,
Cause I believe that You love to show us mercy
But when will You step into our sky blue and say
Thats quite enough,
And your time is up
Am I naive to want a remedy for every bitter heart
Can I believe You hold an exclamation point for every question mark
And can I leave the timing of this universe in bigger hands
And may I be so bold to ask You to please hurry?

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  • 17 years ago

    by beautiful xx disaster

    This is so good.
    keep it up.
    you have so much talent to be able to write a poem like this.
    5/5
    <3jess

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This poem was really hard-hitting and truthful and I really enjoyed it although I wasn't sure if you were trying to rhyme or not...but either way its a good poem!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. this is an amazing poem. i loved it! I loved how you made it relate to the people in our society. great job! 5/5

  • Wow really good i love it it really speaks tome !!! nice work!

  • 18 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    That was really good. And is soo true.