I really liked this. The repetition helped to reinforce a simple yet strong message.
I particularly liked the 'naive' viewpointy you chose to express your message as it added extra depth to the poem. It is a common theme to question the nature of evil in God's great plan but by adding the questions you gave the whole argument a new twist.
5/5

'Am I naive to want a remedy for every bitter heart' - nice use of repetition

'Can I believe You hold an exclamation point for every question mark' - SO unique!! and really comprehensable.

brilliant poem.

That was really good. And is soo true.

Wow really good i love it it really speaks tome !!! nice work!

Wow. this is an amazing poem. i loved it! I loved how you made it relate to the people in our society. great job! 5/5

This poem was really hard-hitting and truthful and I really enjoyed it although I wasn't sure if you were trying to rhyme or not...but either way its a good poem!

~jas~

This is so good.
keep it up.
you have so much talent to be able to write a poem like this.
5/5
<3jess