Because You Are Only A Dream

by Cherry   Nov 12, 2006


I woke up & u were there
Everything that I had ever wanted
U place my hand on ur chest
And I felt a beat
Then u spoke & asked a question
U asked why I was crying
Then I answered
" Because You Are Only A Dream"

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  • 12 years ago

    by *emmax*

    I admire the way you wrote this,whereby unexpectedly something happens in the text!

    The way it ends,no one saw that coming!beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Omg WOW!!!!! when i was reading this i was like, well this is sweet. how culd u sum up the whole thing in just a few little lines left to read. but then i red it n hte ending.... shit.... i REALLY like this. its so cleaver.... nice job

    thx for all the comments. its really good to hear that someone is actually listening to me. it means alot

    much love .xx

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow so powerful you have an amazing styel so refreshing..give me time rachel and i will read and comment them all k??

    have a great day!!
    lissa :)

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