Wow so powerful you have an amazing styel so refreshing..give me time rachel and i will read and comment them all k??

have a great day!!
lissa :)

Omg WOW!!!!! when i was reading this i was like, well this is sweet. how culd u sum up the whole thing in just a few little lines left to read. but then i red it n hte ending.... shit.... i REALLY like this. its so cleaver.... nice job

thx for all the comments. its really good to hear that someone is actually listening to me. it means alot

much love .xx

I admire the way you wrote this,whereby unexpectedly something happens in the text!

The way it ends,no one saw that coming!beautiful