Wow you are really great and keep up your wonderful poems..

5/5. Amazing. So sad. I loved it!

Thank you i appreciate it

Wow you left me really speachless. wow!!!

Woah... This is really great!! It has an excellent flow, and excellent usage of vocab. Its really really sad, im sorry that this happened to you :-( Still great job! Keep writing! xx

Ohh...I'm crying again...you really know how to touch a nerve with the reader...this was amazing, so sad yet so beautifully written.

Man that is sad i like it...again im sorry for your mom...5/5

If you read the poetry the way it is supposed to be read theres really no problem with flow

Wow this is so sad. An amazing write! So much emotion while keeping up a great flow. Wonderful write! 5/5

marcella

OMG this has so much emotion and the words are written perfectly i really like the ending

That made me cry so sad so heartfelt xx x

Very depressing and relatable (to an unfortunate some). Good writing, and I'm sorry this happened to your friends, may they both rest in peace. This is why I rarely drink, and NEVER drink and drive.

Beautiful! great poem! so true. 5/5

xo kisses xo

I liked it. It was like a movie in my head. I gave it a 5/5. It was great.

Good poem

So depressive..amazingly affective...u started from the beginning with this relation with words to capture readers...
i must say this was interesting

He knows exactly where he's going
A place where death isn't hard to find

and ur closing line
was just so ..hmm..donu touchy..
5/5