I'll be with you forever

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 13, 2006


There is a feeling I get
When I look into your eyes
An amazing feeling of love
Because the heart can tell no lies

I know that in my arms
Is where you feel secure
Our love will never end
Nothing does thats pure

I know that I can trust you
With my heart and so much more
My feelings go down deep inside
To important to ignore

So you can take my hand
And trust me with your life
The pain when were apart
Is like the constant stabbing of a knife

When I'm with you my worries vanish
Like a magic trick they disappear
The only time I'm truly happy
Is when I know your near

Your smile is like the summer sun
So very hot and bright
I'll be with you forever
Because being with you just feels so right

*please rate and comment, will be greatly appreciated* thanks

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "There is a feeling I get
    When I look into your eyes
    An amazing feeling of love
    Because the heart can tell no lies"

    If there's one thing about the heart, it tella us what we really need to know, despite if it's what we want.
    If we could all just learn to trust our heart once in a while rather than let our head intefere, we may be able to feel emotions as clear and pure as what you're describing in this beautiful poem
    5/5 m'dear
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought at times the flow was a little off.
    I don't think this is one of your best, but I liked the imagery and wording you used.
    Overall, I think you did a good job.

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