Comments : I'll be with you forever

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought at times the flow was a little off.
    I don't think this is one of your best, but I liked the imagery and wording you used.
    Overall, I think you did a good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "There is a feeling I get
    When I look into your eyes
    An amazing feeling of love
    Because the heart can tell no lies"

    If there's one thing about the heart, it tella us what we really need to know, despite if it's what we want.
    If we could all just learn to trust our heart once in a while rather than let our head intefere, we may be able to feel emotions as clear and pure as what you're describing in this beautiful poem
    5/5 m'dear
    *Gem*