Wow!
This is another favourite, I liked the way you used repetition in this one, I think it made the poem very powerful, and I loved the way you ended it.

Great balls o' fire. that was outstanding. i don't even know what to say. the images were so rich. i wanted to cry! beautiful. damn. wow, dude. i love reading your work. -beav

Awww i really like this.. im surprised not a lot of people have commented on this one..its really sweet.. i like the repetition too... also.. after reading your new stuff and reading your old stuff i can see how much you really have improved.. your new stuff is amazing .. you really did improve.. just thought i'd let you know that =]... keep up the good work and i'll keep reading ur stuff .

Aww i loved thiss!!! its soo sweet, and the flow is amazingg

Who will stay forever
Always be right by my side
Who will stay forever
No matter how rough the ride

^ i loved that stanzaa... its soo great, and the word choice is amazingg.. keep writing and ill keep reading... 5/5 from me, and thanks for the commentt :]

Good poem

'YOU will give me love
And your the only thing I need'
^favorite lines. Very strong! This is yet another amazing poem. I love it!
5/5
*Brittney

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!
<3