My story

by Krzysztof J   Nov 13, 2006


You may not like this poem,
I don't care if you do,
Its all about my heart,
And the pain it put me thru.

Three years ago she hurt me,
That devil in disguise,
She riped my fragile heart out,
Laughed and ground it into dust.

For two years I was shattered,
Afraid to date again,
Afraid to give my heart away,
To face the hurt again.

Then i met Nyree,
An angel in disguise,
She made me really happy,
Never did she lie.

She loved me just for me,
I felt that it was true,
Can't imagine life without her,
Shes my guardian angel too.

I knew it wouldn't last,
Good things they never do,
I really miss her touch,
and her warm kisses too.

The story end the same,
I'm standing in the rain,
Broken up once more,
Gave up on love for sure.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Awww, don't give up on love! There is someone out there just for you. If those girls made you happy just think of that one special girl that's just for you and how amazing SHE is going to make you feel! If those girls that don't work out make you feel that good, the right girl just for you will make you feel amazing!
    She is out there, trust me. You just have to find her...and if you just give up. You never will. So don't give up now! Keep looking for her...you never know she might be right infront of you...wanting you to notice her...so keep looking okay! I'm not giving up until you find her so trust me...you will hear from me again...lol dum dum dum lol. I'm here for you though....I will listen if you need to talk (type) okay buh-bye!!!!
    Burning~Wings

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    I can relate to this. it's soo deep with emotions. i like the flow. that's true lov. i can't believe the ending. this really touches me. AWESOME:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Don't give up on love
    You've just not met the right person yet.
    I promise that love hits you when you least expect it!
    5/5 cos your poem is so bittersweet yet so brilliant
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jen

    Awww this was a lovely poem, it has a warm feel to it altho it isnt a really really happy one but that could just be me,
    keep it up =]=]=]

    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    I loved your poem and story (^-^)
    (i really do)
    thank you for this beautiful poem and keep it up

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