I loved your poem and story (^-^)
(i really do)
thank you for this beautiful poem and keep it up

Awww this was a lovely poem, it has a warm feel to it altho it isnt a really really happy one but that could just be me,
keep it up =]=]=]

~*~Jen~*~

Don't give up on love
You've just not met the right person yet.
I promise that love hits you when you least expect it!
5/5 cos your poem is so bittersweet yet so brilliant
*Gem*

I can relate to this. it's soo deep with emotions. i like the flow. that's true lov. i can't believe the ending. this really touches me. AWESOME:)

Awww, don't give up on love! There is someone out there just for you. If those girls made you happy just think of that one special girl that's just for you and how amazing SHE is going to make you feel! If those girls that don't work out make you feel that good, the right girl just for you will make you feel amazing!
She is out there, trust me. You just have to find her...and if you just give up. You never will. So don't give up now! Keep looking for her...you never know she might be right infront of you...wanting you to notice her...so keep looking okay! I'm not giving up until you find her so trust me...you will hear from me again...lol dum dum dum lol. I'm here for you though....I will listen if you need to talk (type) okay buh-bye!!!!
Burning~Wings