by Run out of words Nov 13, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
I always thought I knew what I wanted & that you weren't what I looked for, |
by David
You need to take out all the ' in this poem so it flows better. but apart from that minor detail this poem made me smile. well done. |
by Jose Delapaz
Wow, well written u put alot of emotion great job 5\5 I know where you coming from |
by Kurt
I thought it was phenomenal. You hit all the emotions so perfectly, you line up the correct words with the feelings you want to hit. Absolutely great work. |
by Tiffany
I know how you feel, but to me, the poem just wasnt like an actual poem, but a series of sentences... sorry! |
God that is a really good poem i know how you feel |