Wow! WOW! this is .. just .. wow!! lol this is such an AMAZING POEM!!! times 100 ... its so strong and your great with words it gives a visual of exactly how your feeling... and i especially LOVE LOVE LOVE the ending few lines they flow great and are the perfect way to end this poem.. i just wow.. and so amazed im not even joking you have a lot of talent.. keep it up!