It's Hard Work Being A Star

by Gem   Nov 13, 2006


(Just to avoid confusion, each line is a different person making a wish, it's not the same person throughout. Peace x)

"I wish I was really famous"
"I wish I had blonde hair"
"I wish I had a boyfriend"
"I wish someone would care"

"I wish I could win the lottery"
"I wish I could see the world"
"I wish I had a puppy"
"I wish to find the perfect girl"

"I wish I could learn Spanish"
"I wish this night would never end"
"I wish my arms were muscley"
"I wish I could see my friend"

"I wish I had a better car"
"I wish to have a child"
"I wish I could fall in love"
"I wish I was more mild"

"It's hard work being a shooting star
And granting each request
One night I'm going to wish myself
To have a nice long rest" ©

*Gem*

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  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Awesome..different, unique..hmm great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    How very creative Gemma !

    The lines just seemed to fall magically in place. And the ending stanza was so cute. Sure did put a smile on my face.
    Wonderful read Gemma, very much enjoyed.

    I was I was more mild"
    ^^^^
    Second last stanza, last line. I think you may have meant 'wish' instead of 'was'.....so sorry if I am wrong.

    Take care and keep writing. I am very much enjoying your funny poems and look forward to reading more of your poetry soon.

  • 18 years ago

    by jamie lynn

    Ha ha ha that was funny i liked it lol

  • 18 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Very good :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Sorrow

    That was just awsome. Poor poor star :) very nice poem!

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