What Have I Done?

by Rose   Nov 13, 2006


What have I done?
I let him come over to my house,
we started messing around,
but it is you I love,
its just hard to trust you,
you did the same thing to me for 2 years straight,
but I feel guilty,
but one thing I can say is he forced me,
I didnt want to do what I have done,
because I love you,
you said this time you wouldn\'t hurt me,
but then I went and hurt you,
this is why its going to be my little secret,
I cant tell you what I have done,
but if you hurt me again,
I wont care about all the wrong things I have done,
yes actually I will,
because I love you,
I dont think I can keep this secret from you,
he made me,
would you believe me,
or just up and leave me,
baby, I love you,
I hope you dont just get up and leave me,
I have done what you did to me for years,
so please dont be hypocritical,
just stay with me,
I love you!

***has anyone else ever been in this situation? If you have please let me know and help me out on this one because I need some tips on how to deal with the situation Ive been put into...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Veja

    Well the poem is not bad at all , but u have quite a few problems with the strycture and putting yur commas the right place . In certain parts of the poem you are stating one thng and then turning around your words e.g. i would not care about all the wrong things i have done , actually i will because i love you- that shud express the first partbetter because then it seems as i f you are just not sure of what u are felling , it sees confusing

    Otherwords i know how the situation feels but keep up writting , u will get better just keep expressing yourself.

  • 18 years ago

    by Veja

    Well the poem is not bad at all , but u have quite a few problems with the strycture and putting yur commas the right place . In certain parts of the poem you are stating one thng and then turning around your words e.g. i would not care about all the wrong things i have done , actually i will because i love you- that shud express the first partbetter because then it seems as i f you are just not sure of what u are felling , it sees confusing

    Otherwords i know how the situation feels but keep up writting , u will get better just keep expressing yourself.

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