I was entranced, the flow was amazing, and so was the imagery.
Good Job!

Very well worded, painted a very real picture. Good write here, sad, but very good

Wow omg lov all ur poems keep writing
u r doin a great job well talk to you later ok
well bye

Absolutely amazing! u got across wut u wanted perfectly! loved it!

You write very well, I love this poem alot. Its very good! Nice job!

O wow this is really a sad poem. i think it made me cry. u r doing a really good job and thank u so muck 4 the comment it really means a lot. bye and anyways talk to u later some other time

This one is also great...ur rele good ..keep it on .

THANX FO TH3 COMM3NT BUT iiM LUViiN THiiS PO3M THO iiTS R3AL GOOD

Wow that was such an amazingly powerful poem. I don't know what else to say, that about sums it up it was just too good for words. Keep writing =]

Pip xxx

Flow was nice. The last stanza was too good. It nicely ties back into this piece. It progresses to the point and keeps attention focused throughout the entire thing. Imagery-though not exactly the most vivid it could be-worked well for this piece. Excellent work. Astonishing write...it was different than expected.
~Faith-less

Woah! Your right, i did enjoy reading this poem. It had a great flow. It was really powerful. One thing that kinda threw me off was that you didnt use any punctuation. I think you could of improved this by using it a bit more. Still a very enjoyable read, keep it up! xx

I liked this, my favourite part was the last stanza, I found it really powerful and sad.
I enjoyed the flow in this, and I liked how you kept to the point the whole way through the poem.

You're right I really do like this poem it is very good along with most of your others keep it up and thanks for the comment! buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

5/5. Made me cry harder. I'm at school too. lol. okay to the poem. This is very well-written and has alot of emotions. Welcometo my favorites list!

Dude this is cool, my life in a nutshell. Your a really good writer u know tha?

A ton of emotion encased in this poem. This is yet another great write from Mr. Karl wild lol. But vain is spelled vein. Just to let you know. 5/5

marcella

Good poem

Wow this is so sad....i really really enjoyed reading this piece...it flowed nicely and the rhyming was perfect..nice job. 5/5

This is heart clenching.

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