Captured

by The Black Rose   Nov 13, 2006


Actually this is a song and no Poem but OK...

Captured

I'm captured
in the prison of life
and i need to escape
but i can't
there are too much loved ones around me
they'll cry and be sad
but i don't want them to
i want them to understand
i want them to understand my pain and misery
but they can't
they don't see the pain inside
they don't see what i need
the pain inside is growing every second every minute
and some people rather see me dead
I'm one of them
one person who sees me rather dead
cold and dead
but i want to be buried
buried alive and no one can hear me
the screams and the crying
crying because I've been a B(...)d
now I'm captured
captured in a coffin
my coffin of death
and no one can save me in time
because I'm six feet under
and almost dead
the oxygen is running out
and I'm almost fainting
one last sigh
and it's sure by now
I'm dead
and I'm buried alive

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  • 17 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    Well, I'll leave a comment after reading that. I'd have to go with medicore on that poem. Ranting poetry has to be kind of short in my view most of my ranting poetry is quick and non-painful.
    So, I give this a three for sounding like my mom being drunk.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sammib

    Well, its definitely dark, and most certainly disturbing if that was what you were going for. But at the same time, also deeply sad... life only takes you prisoner if you allow it to, you dont like the way life is... then change it. You alone have the power to change your own world.

    Sammib

  • 18 years ago

    by Birgit

    Omg.. o.O deze is gOed.. hij zorgt helemaal voor koude rillingen bij mij.. o.O wow! khoop alleen niet dat je het echt meent.. ;) xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by lost and incomplete

    I look up to you i really do your an amazing poet and you realy helped me thank you your admirer
    james

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