I Love the Way...

by *Charisma*   Nov 13, 2006


I love you is too much right now
I don't know you enough to say it.
But I like you seems to fit well,
And I hope I can convey it.

I like you like the flowers,
Who enjoy the bright sunny days.
I like you like wild horses
Who into the horizon blaze

I like you like the grey moon
Who has the stars as his friends.
I like you like a rainbow
Who's arches never seem to end.

I like you like the dolphin
Who owns the great ocean blue.
I like you enough to say,
I love the way I like you!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "I like you like the grey moon
    Who has the stars as his friends."

    That line was so cute, it really made me smile, the whole poem did.
    Althought Midnight Sun has a point, i liked the way it is because it sounds fun and happy and in my opinion, love IS fun and happy.
    But hey, to each their own =)
    5/5 as always!!
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I do like this one a lot too, but one suggestion that I have is after you talk about wild horses you should use something a little more .... sophisticated I guess. Cause when I read that first line it sounded really beautiful but then I just saw 'run and play' and it seemed a little childish. Then again you might of wanted that if all you wanted to convey was more of a crush then love. Either way I loved your poem once again, keep it up! = )
    ~Midnight Sun

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