Simply breathtaking.. i still have chills running down my spine from this.. absoloutly amazing, excellent job 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

Good poem, very strong emotions. The flow was ify in a few places, but it was all in all a nice write!

pLease r/r/c "the mirror" "rose colored glasses" and the other is your choice

This poem raises some very good points!
It really makes people think! (Well it made me think and when you've done that, you know you're getting somewhere!! lol)
5/5 for making me think =P
*Gem*