by Mommy And Me Nov 13, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Shards of tainted glass; |
The rhyming is great, and the story you tell is even better. It's a great poem, you have a gift. |
by TeAr dROp
Wow your poem was so good keep it up!!!! |
by ashley
Wow ur amazing!!! |
Beautiful poem, I really got it and felt the intensity and almost expectancy of what you meant, great job |