Comments : Open our Eyes Witness the Beauty

  • 17 years ago

    by LovelessAndConfused

    Awesome

  • 17 years ago

    by behindxthextears

    Your so good at writing poems!
    awsome work

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    A nice poem, normally i don't like poems about life but this one is okay, good flow and rhyming, I enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work!
    kisses stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow...I loved this poem! It's everything I've always wanted to write about. It's that emotion that everyone feels when there having a good time. I loved it. I just wanted to let you know I'm adding it to my favorite poems.
    5/5
    Kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I love this one. 5/5 from me!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    Wow, I could really relate to this poem. It flowed nicely and I loved your use of repetition, it fit the style you wrote in. Keep up the good work. ^^ *5/5*

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    My gosh this poem is amazing. Your voice is clear and strong. there is emotion that is so well conveyed, and there are some wonderful uses of imagery. 5/5 from me because i love this and cant find a single negative thing about it