Dreaming away with the world, nice feeling to have
very well written
must also be the first time on this site I saw someone use the word procrastination
keep it up :)

I thought this was pretty good, I liked the idea of it. Know where you are coming from ;). Well done :).

I like this poem, it's got a lovely rhyming scheme and it's kind of serious, but ends kind of funny. Yeah, I like this poem. Excellente.

W00t w00t!! haha i'm so noobish. xD

5/5

Haha.. Nice.. That's just like me. XD

I liked this poem... lol... i agree with ocean soul about u being the first person i have ever seen use the word procrastination... lol... and i defiantely udnerstand where you are coming from with the exams.. i hate them and i would gladly look out a window rahter than study.. and im sorry for this being a long comment but im longwinded and i really liked this poem and it had great flow and it was also short and simple at the same time... lol.. keep it up.. 5/5

Hey thanx for the comment i forgot to write on it it wasnt finished lol but u figured it out but i completed it today yay
:) i really luv this poem its different and describes the world heaps good and i really really really luvd the ending because i can seriously relate to it lol
luvd it

Yea i love it =] 5/5
it totally relates to everyone ahha
~christina

Haha thanks for the comments, they're great! Lol, you know the "stupid guy from above" in the poem you commented? Observe what happens when people you don't want to find out about your account find out about your account. Lol, don't matter. Hey Stacey, you haven't done anything since Novemember last year? You gonna write some more stuff? I'll be waiting to see it! :P xo Harris

This is a real good poem. The way you described the clouds was beautiful :D

xxx alex xxx