Your Crying Hurts Me Too

by ForeverGoneInYourEyes   Nov 13, 2006


I can only take so much
You make me wanna cry
You've made me lost
I wish I could be there for you

Yet my distance keeps us part
When I hear that you cry
My heart dies alil inside
I feel attached to your pain

I would try to lift you
But there is only so much I can do
Only so much I can help you with
Its mainly all up to you

I can help mend your feelings
I can help you get through
One thing I regret though is this
Not being able to be there

So please listen to my plea
No more crying just for me
Your a girl who should smile and feel free
I love you so please no more crying

This is my plea
Cause I love you so much
I may only be a friend
But it doesn't matter cause I'm in for the long run

This crying we do it hurts us both
No more of this unless its true
That one of us is dead
The other left alone

But just remember this your never alone
Cause no matter where I go I'll be by yourside
No matter my place or where I reside
No more crying cause love is beyond that.

*Only if I could talk like I write LOL*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Leanne

    Love the last bit great poem really emotional 5/5
    great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor

    Yeah, crying is pretty much pointless, don't you think? All it does is make you feel pathetic and weak. Although, I do like how you try to reason with this person and try to lend a shoulder to cry on. (excuse the pun, I couldn't help myself) lol good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    Again, spelling and grammer mistakes take away from your talent. Just try to fix that and people will see how great of a poet you really are!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Aww this is sooo sweet! the only thing i found a problem with is this line:

    My heart dies alil inside...... a lil ***

    Other than that, it was beautiful! I love how you titled it, AMAZING! I loved this part the best:

    I would try to lift you
    But there is only so much I can do
    Only so much I can help you with
    Its mainly all up to you

    I can help mend your feelings
    I can help you get through
    One thing I regret though is this
    Not being able to be there

    Great Job

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Excellent job, very sweet poem. The only suggestions is to watch the "your" words and to expand your vocab. keep on writing!

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