Awww, this is so sweet! I love your poems. And yeah, I can write how I feel, but saying it? No way...lol I hate that. But again GREAT POEM! keep it up kk...buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Very good poem. In the 5th stanza you seem to put at the end of each line that sounds the same and if you do that it kinda clashes and the rhythem doesn't flow. Instead of using "ur" or "u" trying spelling it just makes your poems more proper. No critizism just advice. Overall it was a very wonderful poem. Just a few tips for writing. 5/5 still. God Bless.

♥Taylor

Thats a great heart felt poem, i loved the ending too stanzas...good job

I love this poem!
So please listen to my plea
No more crying just for me
Your a girl who should smile and feel free
I love you so please no more crying

That is my favorite part!
I really wish someone would feel that way about me...

Excellent job, very sweet poem. The only suggestions is to watch the "your" words and to expand your vocab. keep on writing!

Aww this is sooo sweet! the only thing i found a problem with is this line:

My heart dies alil inside...... a lil ***

Other than that, it was beautiful! I love how you titled it, AMAZING! I loved this part the best:

I would try to lift you
But there is only so much I can do
Only so much I can help you with
Its mainly all up to you

I can help mend your feelings
I can help you get through
One thing I regret though is this
Not being able to be there

Great Job

5/5

Again, spelling and grammer mistakes take away from your talent. Just try to fix that and people will see how great of a poet you really are!

Yeah, crying is pretty much pointless, don't you think? All it does is make you feel pathetic and weak. Although, I do like how you try to reason with this person and try to lend a shoulder to cry on. (excuse the pun, I couldn't help myself) lol good job.

Love the last bit great poem really emotional 5/5
great job