Honestly...this was a beautiful poem with a great beginning. In the 3rd stanza I would use a word other than sit cuz you used it twice. But other than that it was pretty good and a good write from you! Glad to see you posting again! LOL !
Charisma*

A really excellent poem. it creates a vivid image that i think everyone can relate to. keep it up

"Please, just let me sit here one more night
Let me sadly dwell on my past
I need a few more hours
To watch the hourglass"

I can relate to this right now in so many ways.
Sometimes we just need time to relax the mind and sort out the tumble of thoughts..
Your vocab and metaphors are amazing as always!
5/5
*Gem*