All I Ever Wanted .

by BrokenREALiTy   Nov 13, 2006


All I ever wanted,
Was for a boy to understand me.
For someone to see past the act,
And know I wasn't happy.

Just wanted someone who didn't sweet talk,
And not mean the things he'd say .
For a guy who'd try and make me smile,
In every different way.

I don't ask for much,
Just for a guy whose feelings are real.
Not just another jack a s s,
That doesn't understand how I feel.

For someone to hold me when I'm sad,
Or even if I'm simply cold.
Someone that'll wipe away my tears,
And let the real me unfold.

Just a guy that cares,
Who won't want me for my looks.
Someone who won't use me,
Who'll take the time to read me like a book.

Someone that'll say, "I love you,"
And actually mean every word.
And out of all the girls, he'll put me first,
Not second, or third.

And even after all my mistakes,
And all the wrong I done.
He'll still love me for me,
And I'll be his number one.

And all I had to do,
Was feel his warm embrace.
And I'd be able to tell,
That I was in the right place.

He wouldn't mind the scars,
The swearing, and the ferocity.
Even the imperfections,
And my stupidity.

That even if I was a murderer,
He'd still want us to be.
And even though I'm not the perfect girl,
He'd still love me.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

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  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Beautiful for me to read. It's what girls want it guys, yet now days it's so hard to find. :(

    He'll wouldn't mind the scars,
    The swearing, and the ferocity.
    Even the imperfections,
    And my stupidity.

    ^ My favorite stanza because I can relate, especially the first line. There aren't many guys who will actually be there to care for you after he hears all the crap the we go through in our lives.

    Great flow and the rhyming wasn't forced either. P.E.R.F.E.C.T!
    5/5

    Stephanie

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    I don't ask for much,
    Just for a guy who's feelings are real.
    Not just another jack a s s,
    That doesn't understand how I feel.
    ^^ Loved that.

    I can relate to this poem, as well.
    Once again, you did a great job.
    I loved it.
    You're going on my favorites.. and NEVER leaving. :] -Giggles-

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous

    How cute!! Sounds like someone's Prince Charming- I like, I like. It flows very well. 5/5