Comments : All I Ever Wanted .

  • 18 years ago

    by Anonymous

    How cute!! Sounds like someone's Prince Charming- I like, I like. It flows very well. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    I don't ask for much,
    Just for a guy who's feelings are real.
    Not just another jack a s s,
    That doesn't understand how I feel.
    ^^ Loved that.

    I can relate to this poem, as well.
    Once again, you did a great job.
    I loved it.
    You're going on my favorites.. and NEVER leaving. :] -Giggles-

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Beautiful for me to read. It's what girls want it guys, yet now days it's so hard to find. :(

    He'll wouldn't mind the scars,
    The swearing, and the ferocity.
    Even the imperfections,
    And my stupidity.

    ^ My favorite stanza because I can relate, especially the first line. There aren't many guys who will actually be there to care for you after he hears all the crap the we go through in our lives.

    Great flow and the rhyming wasn't forced either. P.E.R.F.E.C.T!
    5/5

    Stephanie