Dear Pat:
I wrote that poem for English Class as an assignment.

Love it, love it, love it lol
Simple yet truly powerful piece. You picked the right words to describe the ambient and emotions and this is truly captivating and vivid. I wish it was longer because I really enjoyed but you should leave it as it is, cause the fact that you managed to say so much within such short piece is impressive. Also, I like the flow and rhythm of this piece a lot.
Keep up!