Comments : The first death I experienced!

  • 20 years ago

    by Jo

    Thanks actualy he died a couple of years ago, but I just thaught that there should be something in a tribute to him so, I wrote this poem!
    Thanks for your comments, there realy apreciated!

  • 20 years ago

    by heather

    great poem and i am sorry for the loss. keep writing.

  • 20 years ago

    by Jo

    Hi didnt mean to deleate that comment, was a slip of the finger on my mouse, sorry

  • 20 years ago

    by ~* Joyful *~

    hey i liked your poem if you get time have a look at some of my poems and let me know what you think and give me any tips that you might have..

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    thats so sad yet so nice, the strength, keep it up!
    luv kt.