+.+ I see you've had 12 visits and no-1 has voted and/or commented!! How could they do that?? This is such a awesome poem!! Seriously, I don't usually rave about poems unless there really good. And girl, this is GOOD!! Love ya work +.+

This is great......i just can't figure out the hidden meaning....sorry i'm slow haha

Wow! what a Poem!! damn... that was FANTASTIC!!! speechless... I've never read something like that... a most pleasant read, Jenna!!

Ciao xx *easily 5/5*

Hey! This is an awesome poem! Im left speechless! This is just great! and sorry i couldnt figure out the hidden meaning either! But the poem is jsut sooo good!

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Love Sucks

Wow that poem was soo amazing!

Wow both beautiful and long, I could never write like this and I hope you continue to because I'm adding you to fav.s Your poems are wicked awesome and I love them all! Great Job 5/5

-Mia

I really do love this poem...the tragedy is beautiful..so yea if u told me the hidden mANINGS THAT WOULD help me understand it better

Something about this poem just worked really well... if it had just been the first stanza, you might have risked having just another suicide poem, but the fact that you showed the situation from the side of the girl as well, when she didn't know.... that was really cool. good work

Sweety. i love you. and i think i can peice together some of the hidden meanings. i love you dear. i really do.

That was ... INCREDIBLE! I mean, just breathtaking! I am so glad I read it and it kept me intrigued the whole way through. Oh! And I wanted to thank you so much for your poem in my contest. It was my first and I was afraid of how it would turn out, but I was really pleased. So thank you so much for that. Keep up the excellent work! :)
~Midnight Sun

This is so sad. Really didnt get the meaning though but you took the time to write this so now I know why its special to you! I'm sorry about your dad!

At first i though i was reading a story, but now i still astauned by the end of the play, it just hurts to know that these two souls have never met...well there is always after life, awesome work...its a good read...

Awesome poem. I love this.

I looooooove this so much. I love you as an author! I don't get the hidden message though.