Revenge upon myself

by somehow broken   Nov 14, 2006


Everything built up on me,
I couldn't take the strain.
So I blocked you out,
Sorry to cause you that pain.

My body and soul separated.

My lips smiled,
I laughed,
And sang.

Then I'd be alone,
My breaths were unsteady,
Eyes wept,
I felt numb.

So now I hold onto this razor,
And strike it at my leg.
The blood trickles to my feet,
But still I feel no pain.

I press a little deeper,
Praying that will work.
Instead I set revenge upon myself.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Great poem! And thank you so much for commenting on mine! means so much to me!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is really sad. A good way to express your feelings. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Then I'd be alone,
    My breaths were unsteady,
    Eyes wept,
    I felt numb."

    I can really relate to that at the this moment in time.
    Nice work. It flowed really well
    5/5
    *Gem*

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By somehow broken