Comments : Revenge upon myself

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Then I'd be alone,
    My breaths were unsteady,
    Eyes wept,
    I felt numb."

    I can really relate to that at the this moment in time.
    Nice work. It flowed really well
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is really sad. A good way to express your feelings. Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by LovinMyLife

    Great poem! And thank you so much for commenting on mine! means so much to me!!!!