by ForeverGoneInYourEyes Nov 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I find myself in a state of misery |
by Biya
Know that I'm breaking inside |
by Biya
Awesome poem ... |
by ForeverYoung
Verry strong emotion filled poem! wows! deffinatly verry powerfuly worded, and heartfelt! The flow in the 3rd stanza was a little off though. |
Very sad and emotianal peace of writing. It has a nice flow and was very touching. One peace of advice id give is the use of punctuation. I think you should of used it. It kinda threw me off the peom. Still a good read keep it up! xx |
by steve
Man i have the same problem alot, dont show much emotion im either smilen or im not i never look sad though |