I can relate...it was like you were writing about my life..
keep it up..and I'm gonna take you up on your offer for a friend...add me if ya wanna talk or something

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Very sad and full of emotion, but it's a very good poem. Once again great job!
5/5 God Bless.

♥Taylor

Another good poem! Emotions were much more heartfelt in this one, it was pretty good!
-AnnMarie

Man i have the same problem alot, dont show much emotion im either smilen or im not i never look sad though

Very sad and emotianal peace of writing. It has a nice flow and was very touching. One peace of advice id give is the use of punctuation. I think you should of used it. It kinda threw me off the peom. Still a good read keep it up! xx

Verry strong emotion filled poem! wows! deffinatly verry powerfuly worded, and heartfelt! The flow in the 3rd stanza was a little off though.
The Last two lines were definatly my favourite!
4/5
~Steph.

Awesome poem ...
5/5
Biya

Know that I'm breaking inside
No more feeling in my face
Cause I wasted my emotions way to often
I thought this would never happen

lovely lines