by ForeverGoneInYourEyes Nov 14, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
You think that I'm an angel |
I hate to be negative but I didn't like it. You had a few spelling errors such as "my please" There were too many word repetitions for it to be clear. The message was there, but it was a chore finding it. |
by LadyPearl
Nice job. Your first stanza was the strongest. There was quite a bit of repetition of the word choice. Your last stanza was beautiful. Check your last line of the first stanza. Keep it up |
by Just Lisa
Heyy! Nice poem... I really liked it! It's really well written...awesome! It's a 5/5 for sure! |