What I Did

by ForeverGoneInYourEyes   Nov 14, 2006


You think that I'm an angel
You think that I would be good
You might even think you should be like me
But listen to my please

I have done things few can say
I stomach my heart when I realize
The things I've done bewarely speakable
Maybe some are worse than others

It doesn't matter though
Cause it was only me who did them
I couldn't help myself from what I did
I so hate myself for no control

Please forgive me for what I did
You may say yes in that voice I know
But I hope you say it the way I know
That you mean it like the way I do

So please open you heart and say those words
Forgive my soul for wondering off again
I can't help but be lost in what I did
Your words can heal what I did

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  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar179

    I hate to be negative but I didn't like it. You had a few spelling errors such as "my please" There were too many word repetitions for it to be clear. The message was there, but it was a chore finding it.

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Nice job. Your first stanza was the strongest. There was quite a bit of repetition of the word choice. Your last stanza was beautiful. Check your last line of the first stanza. Keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Heyy! Nice poem... I really liked it! It's really well written...awesome! It's a 5/5 for sure!
    *Just Lisa*

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