I liked how at the end you really kinda ask for forgiveness and i think that is the right thing to do.

+.+ I agree with Mo. :) I love all your work. +.+

Aww that's really sad, I loved the last stanza the best.. I can really relate to it.. The flow and rhthym was really good, there were a couple of slight spelling errors but other than that.. well done 5/5 xx

P.S Hope ya don't mind me pointing them out..
2nd stanza 'Ive'... I've
3rd stanza 'misary'... misery
4th n 5th stanza... 'mabye'... maybe

Wow i love it! my favorite part:

Mabye I wouldnt be this broken
Or have gone against what i believe
Mabye Id still be daddy little girl
And I wouldnt want to leave

ONE of my favorites!!!

-Mel

Great poem..i loved it! so much emotion..keep writing thats really good.
katie

So much pain, so much hidden fear and grief. God is here for you, don't build the pain up inside. God loves you, secret or no secret.

Aww, this poem is great! I love how you describe everything so perfect, and your vocabulary is amazing!

Maybe this stanza needs some help:
Its full of pain and misary
Full of memories I wont forget
The pictures running through my head
Of so many decisions I regret

BTW you spelt misery wrong.

Other than that

It was Excellent!

5/5