Scribble (Short Poem)

by LadyPearl   Nov 14, 2006


Charcoal smudges the edges
of my marble white paper
Closing my eyes in the room
I feel my fingers waver

First a line and then another
Driven by a force unknown
A mouth, an eye, a round nose
Strings of faces shown

Seated upon my flower bed
I stare into the frowns of those
Who lived and carried on a life
In a way unlike most

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  • 18 years ago

    by in love

    This is a poem that makes you think,there is not really any emotion here, but in a way there was.Whoever wrote it is taking art to a deeper level.
    i like it...

  • 18 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Great poem :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like this. It's very unique and just has a nice feel to it. It is short, but I think that it's length worked very nicely with the poem. And the whole poem in general was just very neat.. the way that you wrote about these people that you drew... very imaginative. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I love the first verse .
    The poem was beautifully written .
    Although it was a bit confusing ,
    It was still good .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Wow... That's really pretty.

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