Very Nice Poem, I Liked It Alot! Keep It Up.5/5

Favorite Verse:
Charcoal smudges the edges
of my marble white paper
Closing my eyes in the room
I feel my fingers waver

5/5. Great poem. It was amazing and very heartfelt.

When I read this, I felt a strange and pleasant feeling. I really like this poem- it's nice and descripive, plus I haven't read a poem about fictional people (I hope that's what it's about). Good job, and as I said, I really liked it. 5/5

I'm speechless. I really enjoyed this poem. I can really imagine what you are writing here and i have a picture in my head. Excellent imagery, and flow. 5/5 Definately.

Tammie

Very good i love it the way you word it is great 5/5

I found is deep. . . Like it took me a couple of readings and every time i seemed to get a bit more out of it. . Forgive if I'm wring but i loved the way the person drawn is looking out of the paper . . .
Brilliant and well thought out. . . It flowed well and the rhyming was natural. . 5/5 good job
Laura
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Your imagery is outstanding once again. I like the contrasts of colours at the start and the descriptive nature of creativity.

Wow, such a short poem but power stacked between the lines. one thing, the last stanza isn't rhyming, "those" and "most' don't really rhyme, so i thought that sort of disrupted the flow. anyway, you did a good job! 5;5

Hmm, that was interesting. So you are drawing pictures of people that lived before you? I found that a little confusing. I didn't really see the point of the poem.. But maybe that is just me. I liked the descriptions you used though and the rhymes worked. I just felt that the poem had no point to it. Nicely written though 5/5

An excellent read! I really liked the discription used throughout it! Had a good flow, and it was written really well! Keep them up! xx

I do not understand why this is called 'Scribble'... Unless it is about drawing?
As you can tell, I got confused, but I cannot deny a well written poem a five. Good job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

See, now usually, I'd run screaming from a rhyming poem, I'm utterly infected with them. But it just goes to show how good you are, because I love this poem just the same, rhymes or no. Love it like I love the rest of your work.
Keep scribbling (no pun intended), and I'll keep reading. Peace out, boy scout. ^^

Hmm, marble white paper. That sounds odd, because marble is a blend of two different colours. So that sort of threw me off. Actually, other than that, the poem was fantastic. Well done Noni, you are very talented!

Wow... That's really pretty.

I love the first verse .
The poem was beautifully written .
Although it was a bit confusing ,
It was still good .
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I really like this. It's very unique and just has a nice feel to it. It is short, but I think that it's length worked very nicely with the poem. And the whole poem in general was just very neat.. the way that you wrote about these people that you drew... very imaginative. Great job on this! 5/5

Great poem :)

This is a poem that makes you think,there is not really any emotion here, but in a way there was.Whoever wrote it is taking art to a deeper level.
i like it...