More Than You Know

by Gem   Nov 14, 2006


(This was for a contest, five stanza's from five of my fave poems I've done. It all kinda fits too =)

I don't know how to tell you
So I'm going to write it down
And try to get the words out
About this happiness I've found

I love you more than you know
That's honestly how I feel
After everything my hearts been through
You were what made it heal

Your fingerprints are imprinted
Forever across my heart
You put the pieces back together
After they were torn apart

You've made my life much brighter
With everything you do
I have no idea what I did
To deserve someone like you

I promise you this now
I'll love you 'til forever
Cos the angels whispered perfect
When we got together ©

*Gem*

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  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Omg, I can't believe I missed this one! It's great! I loved how it's stanzas from different poems but they all fit together....it's kinda like, you were writing different poems but they all kinda meant the same thing....You know what I mean? Great poem and if you ever stop writing I will die! lol Great job!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Aw man ur poems are so beautiful i love reading em =) i loved this line:
    "Cos the angels whispered perfect
    When we got together "
    that was soo cute and awww it was sweet hehe =) anyway keep em coming xx

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Awesome...thats such a kewl idea..and yeah it fit perfectly still my favorite lien was the last

    *i promise you this now, i'll love you 'til forever, cos the angels whispher PERFECT when we got together*

    gahh i jsut want to stieal that concept and change it lol lol i might it thats okay wit you..thats so brilliant..awesome poem totally diggn this one :) :)

    p.s. you never cease to impress me wit your poems yet you do lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Yuffie

    Awesome poem =D

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Wow! im speachless!! its amazing!!! :)

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