It was a beautiful poem, it truly moved me maybe because i've done the same thing more than one time. The only criticism I have is subble should be subtle.

I really like your poems they are all so deep amazing job! Keep it up and thank you for the comment on my poem it means so much to me!
buh-bye
Burning~Wings

Ur poems are great too!! and thanks alot!! :)

Aw. I wonder have you showed this person your poems. I'm sure they'd love them. Very heart touching.
5/5 God Bless!

Taylor♥

Hmmmm good poem! There did not really seem to be any flow to it..... um your emotions were there, but I did not feel them all that strongly! GOOD WRITE,
-ANNMARIE

I like ur poem, it doesnt have too many rhymes but it does have a good flow to it and it is true too have loved is better than not at all