Very nicely written indeed

all the best and take care
5/5

Excellent poem! The flow was not forced at all which made the poem easy and pleasant to read!

-AnnMarie

Ohhhh I love the twist at the end. It is actually a brilliant idea and very misleading. That is what makes this work so well.

--Sher

Wow-i rly like it! um-dont have many comments except flow and rhythm/rhyme was pretty good throughout, theme was cute but kinda sad.

im giving it a 5.

aish
xx